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      More damage than bullet
      I enter her karmic
      magnetic halo field
      meaty she is non and to
      herself mostly spikey toothed
      mean, mouth full of gnawings
      the free open path too, she microscope
      slide human amoeba not
      celestial preacher cinematic
      totalitarian guru---
      nekkid nekkid she goes
      from stodgy urban
      cottage to baby picture
      studio her saving
      grace a de-nutted Micelangelo
      to paint her Raphael-like
      golden glow - -she presents the dough,
      lucre , gold bag goodness,
      "Doll me up Raffie-baby," she
      erstwhile cry as time
      marched by her childhood
      sex sin confessions toll
      to the menopausal death bed.
      She got the dough
      daddio for her baby pix,
      got the dough to doll
      herself up as warm
      fail, nothing she says
      erases the years.
      She couldn't cure the
      enmity of time at her own
      deathbed vision like her mother
      left her smile faced,
      she leaves enmity ridden
      goldbag wonder picture gallery
      filled with her self-proclaimed
      wisdoms enshrining her
      preminence,
      The enmity boiling
      uncomfortable death bed like
      equity squeezer clensch like
      her heart full of nominal song like
      the brain vessel clensch of a revelation ire.
      Not weathering time's enmity
      cereberally, mentally, mentally....
      'til reptilian instincts find a
      look to her deathbed future
      of reptilian soul, loss of
      the eartly goodness, moping-
      groping her astounding
      vocabulary and mentality,
      Deus hewn from fate
      bipedal and soft fleshed
      lizard brain, the soft
      human time eaten by the
      residual reptilian functions,
      chem-burned from her being,
      deathbed approach and her
      eventful eventual angel
      sit on the azimuth she shoot,
      eating each tidbit of
      thought with no odors
      gourmet or clinical, even noting colors,
      cold blood cold finally
      bug food no push vein
      function cold lizard
      cold blood halts.
      "Ain't no tellin' how bad it's been,
      seems like now is jus' like then."
      PP
      Member #21961, posted 01-23-00 01:50 PM

      Wha? Is it totally possible that this lowlife didacticism
      sci-fi is UNWORTHY? If you opened this at least you can do is
      "pitch a little poo"!
      The Poo-flingers been berry goo too me!
      PP
      Member #23864, posted 02-08-00 06:23 PM

      LETS GO----NAILE ME TO YE OLDE TRE. THIS STUFF STINKS.
      BUT THERE IS RAW VISCERAL HUMOR TO BE EXPLORED HERE...
      DO SOMETHING, FEEL FREE TO RESPOND IN KIND
      gnome
      Member #24095, posted 02-09-00 10:15 PM

de-nutted Michelangelo??? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

      whence came the spikey toothed mean mouth
      who would de-nut a Michelangelo
      with nekkid nekkidness
      how so could it be
      lizzard brains served up
      like those white powdered donuts
      you know the ones
      that sit in the machine 6 months waiting
      nothing as nekkid as a white powdered donut
      unwrapped and exposed
      passed it's expiration date
      (when you need a spikey toothed mean mouth)
      CaptPY~The PONG~Mon
      Member #24103, posted 02-09-00 10:43 PM

      Liquered up lizzards lap dog
      To loosers leavin their laptops
      Liein loosely limply lickin their
      wounds Lunatic laughter launches
      lime green scales tells of sheadin
      their tails pulled off by lovin
      lady's lips quipin da phrases dat
      dey wanna be seein no end to insanity
      instantly flashed in intense Arabic
      proctor gambles his goo to you
      so true so true his palmolive
      protector protrudin profussely
      poundin da puddin ta greasy
      consistancy
      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
      Come on PP put up somemore so we can play!!!!!!!!!!!!
      This is sooooooooo much more fun than thinkin ain't it?
      Da"Havin a Ball"Captn
      writeguy
      Member #24105, posted 02-09-00 10:47 PM

      MMMMM-MMMMMM GOOD.. nothing better than a heroin chic succubus...and
      snaggled toothe to boot. Blanche Dubois unearthed and adorned in
      nightie-crawlers? Yessirree!
      kevinar
      Member #24195, posted 02-10-00 01:30 AM

      Very interesting work, PP. I enjoyed the collage of images, the references
      to transition and reptilian "cold blood", and so on. Your language is so
      original and compelling. Yet, I must admit that I am still searching for
      the message here. Perhaps another read will make it click for me. Nice
      job!
      Kevin
      PP
      Member #24942, posted 02-15-00 12:29 AM

      Alright this wavelength was received OK read"Property Managment 101"
      the short story, I was in touch with critiquing evil witchlike women I
      have seen in real life, really y'now those ones like from The Wizard of
      Oz, even if you try to buddy with them it is not good, some of them, the
      vibes, are like well maybe you know one of them too!!! Different than
      Fantasy when it is up close and personal, I must say!
      groriter
      Member #25019, posted 02-15-00 04:45 AM

PP:
 sounds like a nightmare to me. Who would want a real life evil witch
 whether they were from the Wizard of Oz or Wizard of Id?
 Kevinar:
 Maybe the message is that we all have witches in our life - human and/or
 otherwise. Possibly we need a cross to wear around our neck to fend them
 away like vampires. If we don't they may use "blood" for their brews to
 intoxicate us into their mind bending actions.
 ------------------
 Groriter **************************** "Though we travel the world
 over to find the beautiful, we must carry it with us or we find it
 not."Ralph Waldo Emerson 
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